Writing

In term 1 we wrote an Andy Griffiths story of our own. Mine was called ‘Payback Time’ I was happy with what I wrote; for editing we used purple cards that are on Miss S's desk the idea was something that had to happen around the house. Before we started to write we made a plan. Here is my story: In term 2 we wrote a letter to a company that we had a complaint, idea or just to congratulate them, We made a plan on an already set out sheat for planing, I thought that was easyer to do. I had a complaint to Smith’s Chips about how I am not happy with half a packet of chips. We have also written a soilder letter, we did the planing the same way we did the company letter. In the letter that we wrote we were writting back to our family at home. We whatched //Gallipolli// to get some ideas, I like the movie. Here is my letter to the company and my soldier letter: We also did a portal story for the teachers. Mine was called Jelly Land and here it is: Charactors 3 paragraghs Coming off these paragraphs you need to have at least 3 bits of flesh. In the first paragraph you come into the mane idea. In the secend paragraph the mane ideagets bigger. In the third paraghraph you need to work your way out of the mane idea. Here is one of Miss S's //Plan Man's// to get an idea of what I am talking about: EDITING ** When we edit our work we get a purple card off Miss S's desk as I have said, to help us remember what we need to edit. I have used these cards a few times throughout my editing.
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 * PLANING**
 * Intro**
 * Middle**
 * What is flesh?** Flesh is little details that come of your mane idea in the pararghaph. The more you have the better I think.
 * Conclusion-** Fined a solusion to the mane idea.